the grade i am aiming for in my second draft is a low B , which is level 3 and i want my mark to be 34.
include theories
include more of my own analysis
include more footnotes such as books and internet
include more
Wednesday 13 February 2013
Wednesday 6 February 2013
1st draft self evalution
level: 3
mark: 29
grade: C
WWW:
good reference to research
explained how the media has stereotyped Muslims
covered primary texts
conclusion given.
EBI:
more reference to moving image research such as documentaries
go over the work as some parts don't make sense
re arrange some references
put in more footnotes and references
add more up to date research
mark: 29
grade: C
WWW:
good reference to research
explained how the media has stereotyped Muslims
covered primary texts
conclusion given.
EBI:
more reference to moving image research such as documentaries
go over the work as some parts don't make sense
re arrange some references
put in more footnotes and references
add more up to date research
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